Thursday, February 10, 2011

2/10- reading response

In the research paper Slide, Roll, Slam by Nicole Williams the writer goes into very vivid detail. I enjoyed how nicole aromatically started with imagery, for example the sounds of the bowling alley while in action. Then Nicole continued with describing all the people she saw with great detail. When she first got in the Nicole starting describing carol at the front desk so you could Imagen the person yourself. Nicole doesn't stop there with the imagery she continues to describe the group of guys she was sitting behind and observing. Hank was one of the first people she talked too. He is the owner of the bowling the manager of the bowling. based of what she has written and stated frank was a very monotoned person that didn't give off a friendly vibe. I thought it was clever how Nicole stopped watching the bowlers and took a walk. Her vivid description of her little adventure to the "vacant" side of the bowling alley was very interesting. She informs us of a little concession stand and a arcade room she wouldn't have noticed if a kid wasn't there playing what seemed to be pin ball. I believe that this research was really pulled together with all the imagery.

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